Describe your clothes
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?
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I live in Nanchang of China.It is the captial city of JiangXi province.Nanchang is one of Chinese garden cities. For its history,it is also called Chinese heroic city. If you want to know Chinese modern history. You can visit Bayi Uprising Memorical Hall and Bayi uprising Monument. Now Nanchang has many new architectures. For example :the second high ferris wheel in the world,It is 160 meters.And the autumn water square ,There is the biggest musical fountain of Asia in square. Welcome to Nangchang. It is a very beautiful city.
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English Writing Exercise 
Very good Anqi, well done! Only a few grammatical mistakes:
I live in Nanchang which is the capital city of Jiang Xi province in China. Nanchang is known as one of China's 'garden cities' and it is also known as China's 'heroic' city.
To learn more about Chinese modern history you can visit the Bayi Uprising Memorial Hall and the Bayi Uprising Monument.
Nanchang also has many new architectural structures, such as the ferris wheel. It is the second biggest wheel in the world and it stands 160 metres tall. There is also the autumn water square and within the square there is the biggest musical fountain of Asia.
Welcome to Nanchang. A truly beautiful city!
Well done Anqi! Here is another way of writing your description:
I live in Nanchang, China, the capital city of Jiangxi province. It is one of China's garden cities. Historically, it is also known as an heroic city. To know more about modern Chinese history, you can visit the Bayi Uprising Memorial Hall and the Bayi Uprising Monument. Today, there are many new architectuaral features in the city. An example is the feris wheel. At 160 meters, it is the second highest in the world. There is also the Autumn Water Square, with the biggest musical fountain in Asia. The beautiful city of Nangchang welcomes you!
You are doing great! : )
Here are a few corrections:
There are two spaces between sentences when you are typing.
Nanchang is one of the Chinese garden cities. As for its history, it is also called the Chinese Heroic City.
If you want to know about Chinese modern history, you can visit Bayi Uprising Memorial Hall and Bayi Uprising Monument.
Now, Nanchang has many new buildings. (or: architectural structures)
For example: It has the second highest ferris wheel in the world that is 160 meters tall. There is also the biggest musical fountain in Asia in the square, the Autumn Water Square. Or you can say: It also has the Autumn Water Square which is the biggest musical fountain in Asia.
I live in Nanchang, of China. It is the captial city of the JiangXi province. Nanchang is one of the Chinese garden cities. For historic reasons its history, it is also called the Chinese heroic city. If you want to know learn about the Chinese modern history, you can visit Bayi Uprising Memorical Memorial Hall and Bayi uprising Monument. Now Nanchang has many new architectures architectural constructions. For example: the second highest ferris wheel in the world. It is 160 meters tall. And the autumn water square, There which is the biggest musical fountain of Asia located in a square. Welcome to Nangchang. It is a very beautiful city.
Great Job!!