Describing People
Instructions:
Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2
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The woman is young. She's not old. The man is tall. He's not short. The boy is cute. He's not ugly. The girl is pretty. She's not ugly. You are polite. You're not rude. I am nice. I am friendly. I am not shy.
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Nice work
HI, Laura
Very good job.
You use contractions (for example she's) a lot, which is OK in informal talking and writing, but in a formal writing it would be better to use the full form - she is.
Otherwise, it is perfect.
Talk to you soon.
Alex
Very good Laura. Excellent work
Very nice pretty woman!
very good
NO .1
Excellent
A good exercise.
Goooooooooooood (Y)
Excellent. When you use contractions appropriately and correctly (as you did here), the result is not only more familiar, but more natural and like that of a native speaker.
Thanks everybody!! :0)
Great. esta hablando ingles muy bien.
good..
{The woman is young. She's not old.}
same meaning
Excellent
perfect
Good work, practice more.
Good job. Congratulations
Great work....you can also write it as...I am nice and friendly but not shy...:p
waaaw
vary good
10/10
That´s good Laura!
With all these great comments, there's not much point in my saying it, but . . . . excellent!
Stan ^_*
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Perfect!!