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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 2

Describe your street

Instructions: Look outside of your window and describe the movement that is happening on your street. Which direction are the people and the cars moving? How would a guest reach your home from the street?

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My favorite restaurants is Xiangyiyugang.it is near to my work office ,towards him is a river and a small park ,It is very beautiful.
here is good eating fishing.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • 月人 Lunar
    Mochapoints: 18016  |  Teacher Score: 12973 (95%)

    Very good!

    A detail: "towards him is a river and a small park"

    "him" is only used to speak about a man.

    To speak about a thing or a place, you have to use "it".

    The right form is: "towards it is a river and a small park".

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  • Huspel
    Mochapoints: 619  |  Teacher Score: 85 (0%)
    Well done ;-)) change him to it, that`s all
    Submitted over a year ago

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