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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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i am kind of person who normally explore various cafe not settle with one or two. right i'm content with CCD which satiate my drinking and eating appetite. i go with cappuciono with black desert pastry (larger one) and sometimes i love to drink cold coffee or ice tea.
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  • woodster
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    Hi Verve - good work but a few realy small mistakes: person who explores... and doesn't settle... which satiates... cappuccino Don't forget the 's' on the end of the verb when you need it. And capital letters at the start of the sentence!
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  • ScottishKev
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    I am the kind of person who normally explores various cafes, not settle with one or two. I'm content with CCD, which satisfies my drinking and eating appetite. I usually go with a cappuccino and a black desert pastry (larger one) and I sometimes love to drink cold coffee or ice tea too.
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  • Alcione Lopes
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    Ok, Verne. I am a kind person who normally explores various. I love drinking cold coffee or ice tea. After some verbs we use the next verb + ing EX: I hate travelling by bus I Love dancing.
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  • MITI
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    very good!!use capital latter starting a new sentence.
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  • sosise
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    I agree other comments... !
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  • Surya.....
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    well.....I have to agree with other comments...even we 'cut' words n write diff in daily life....internet n chat language is one....study language is another...hehehehehe....but it's ok the way u try....see ya
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  • Ajit
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    I am that kind of person who normally explores  various cafes,  not settle.... Right now i'm content....  which satiates  
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