What can and can’t they do?
Instructions:
Write a list of rules using the vocabulary from this lesson. EX. 1. You can’t smoke in the park. 2. You can park at the restaurant but not at the library.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 1
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You can´t smoke in the restaurant
Where can I to sleep at 10 p.m?
Can I to walk evey day
You can´t go out at night
Can you buy a book whith card
You can´t to sell a TV the your mather!
You can´t to learned whith this sunglasses
I can´t summing at night
My wife can´t play soccer.
I can´t watch tv after at 11P.M
Where can I to sleep at 10 p.m?
Can I to walk evey day
You can´t go out at night
Can you buy a book whith card
You can´t to sell a TV the your mather!
You can´t to learned whith this sunglasses
I can´t summing at night
My wife can´t play soccer.
I can´t watch tv after at 11P.M
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wlcMochapoints: 22228 | Teacher Score: 17814 (99%)You can't smoke in the restaurant. Where can I go to sleep at 10 p.m.? Can I walk everyday? You can't go out at night. Can you buy a book with the card? You can't sell a TV to your mother! You can't read with these sunglasses. I can't swim at night. My wife can't play soccer. I can't watch TV after 11p.m. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
fofMochapoints: 9118 | Teacher Score: 2988 (0%)Well done! My points: 1. the verb 'can' does not need infinitive verb(unless you want to use infinitive in the sentence), e.i. can+verb, not can+to+verb. 2.Please use punctuation. 3. the verb in the past tense -ed never takes 'to', instead you can say: you couldn't(past of can't) learn(or to learn if you mean the process of learning). I hope it helps. ;) Where can I sleep at 10 p.m? Can I walk eveRy day? You can´t go out at night. Can you buy a book with (credit, yours, shopping etc.)card. You can´t sell a TV TO your mOther! You can´t to learn with thESE(plural) sunglasses. I can´t ?summing?(don't understand) at night. I can´t watch tv after 11PM. Good luck! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
-Jᴏɴ-Mochapoints: 267320 | Teacher Score: 260577 (100%)JF - Rules, or commands, should all be statements; they should not be questions. Commands generally start with "you" because they are telling someone else what to do. Sometimes they start with "no", or a verb in a command form. They always end with a period. Some of your rules are in the correct form, but I will re-write the others in command form as much as possible and add one or two for examples. 1) You can't smoke in the restaurant. 2) You must go to sleep before 10pm. 3) You need to walk every day. 4) You can't go out at night. 5) You must buy books with a credit card. 6) You can't sell a TV to your mother. 7) No reading with sunglasses. 8) No swimming at night. 9) No soccer playing allowed. 10) No television after 11 P.M. 11) Walking on the grass is prohibited. 12) Pick up your toys and put them away before you eat. If you have questions about any of this, please send me an email. I wish that I knew Portuguese so that we could communicate that way. Sometime we should talk with the chat tool. Keep working on this. It takes a long time but it is useful to learn. -- Jon Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
soniaMochapoints: 2696 | Teacher Score: 488 (0%)hey this was not good at all. always use full stops,pounctation marks and commas. Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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