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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 3

Staying at a Hotel

Instructions: Use the vocabulary from this lesson to describe a time you stayed in a hotel. Were you on a business trip or vacation? Did you order room service? Did you use their computers? Did you have breakfast in bed? Etc.

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I was inside of the hotel. The employee gave me a magazine. I read it, and after I went to the room; there was a lot of armchair, and in front of the hall there was a big mirror. The decoration was wonderful. In affternoon I used my computer, because I needed to send some e-mails for my boss. After I drank juice on the bed. Outside of the hotel there was a swimming pool, and of course that I swam inside it. I Loved this trip.
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  • Bernardo A. Gou...
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    Olá Hebe! O texto está muito bom. Algumas correções abaixo. /// I was inside of the hotel. The employee gave me a magazine. I read it|| and after |that| I went to the room; there was a lot of armchair|| and |there was a big mirror| in front of the hall. The decoration was wonderful. |During the| a|f|ternoon I used my computer, because I needed to send some e-mails |to| my boss. After |that| I drank juice on the bed. |There was a swimming pool| outside of the hotel|| and of course that I swam |on| it. I loved this trip. /// Bye!!
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    Very good. Here are some corrections: "WHEN I ARRIVED AT the hotel, the RECEPTIONIST gave me a magazine. I read it and after, I went to MY room. There WERE SEVERAL armchairS THERE, and in the hall there was a big mirror. The decoration was wonderful. In THE AFTERNOON I used my computer because I needed to send some e-mails for my boss. After, I drank juice on the bed. Outside the hotel there was a swimming pool, and of course, I swam IN it. I loved this trip."
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  • Joe
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    I was in the hotel. The employee gave me a magazine. I read it, and after that I went to the room. There were many armchairs and in front of the hall there was a big mirror. The decoration was wonderful. In the afternoon I used my computer because I needed to send some e-mails for my boss. After that, I drank juice on the bed. Outside of the hotel there was a swimming pool and of course I swam in it. I Loved this trip.
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