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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 4

A Shopping Trip

Instructions: Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?

Hebe's submission: Average Rating:
Last week I went to downtown and I bought a skirt for my friend. My mother was shopping for jewelry . She paid one hundred dóllars for it.
After we went to other store and I bought some earrings and a necklace.
When we came home the employee held the bags.
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  • Peter Murrell
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    Well done. Just small corrections: "Last week I went downtown and I bought a skirt for my friend. My mother was shopping for jewelry AND she paid one hundred dollars for it. After, we went to ANOTHER store and I bought some earrings and a necklace. When we came home the employee held the bags."
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  • Behzad akbar
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    what do u want to mean by last sentence?

    Good work. 
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  • carl150
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    Last week I went downtown. (not to downtown).

    Afterwards we went to ANOTHER store.

    The rest is fine.  Good job!

     
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