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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 2

Giving and Receiving

Instructions: Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?

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I got a present from my mother. It was a gold necklace. I gave her a black coat. She loved to get it. The day before yesterday the mail man gave ten letters for my father. Now I am giving food for my dog.
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  • hengki
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    She loved to have it. The day before yesterday the mail man gave ten letters to my father. Very good.
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  • Andre
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    good job
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  • Helen
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    Hi, Hebe. A very good effort..just a few mistakes. It's better to say, "She loved it." "the mailman [or postman,as we say in U.K. and Australia] gave [or DELIVERED] ten letters TO my father. "food TO my dog". Best wishes, Helen.
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  • clarion_schidmi...
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    I think you should work more on your grammar. It just needs a little more effort and then I'm sure you'll master the language.

    Good Luck
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  • Ronald
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    Excelent!

    Keep it up!

    You are doing great!!!!
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  • Machiavelo
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    Very good, Hebe.

    I got a present from my mother.  It was a gold necklace.  I gave her a black coat.  She loved to get  it. The day before yesterday, the mailman gave (delivered is better) ten letters to my father.  Now I am giving food to my dog.
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