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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 3

Needs and Wants

Instructions: Compare “need” and “want” in sentences about six people: you and me, a boy and a girl, a man and a woman. Also, use positives and negatives of either “need” or “want” in some of the sentences. Example: I want a car, but I need to finish my college degree. She wants ice cream; she does not want broccoli.

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You need to fly from French to China.
When you will arrive at the Shanghai airport,you need to ride a bus to the Shanghai station,then you need by train .several hours later you will arrive at my living city .
my living city is zhenjiang,it is a beautiful ,small,comfortable city .
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  • 月人 Lunar
    Mochapoints: 18016  |  Teacher Score: 12973 (95%)

    You need to fly from French France * to China.

    When you will arrive at the Shanghai airport, you need to ride a bus to the Shanghai station, then you need by to take a train. Several hours later you will arrive at my living city. My living city is zhenjiang, it is a beautiful, small, comfortable city.

    * I am French, but I live in France.

    Very good work! Follow this way.
    Submitted over a year ago
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