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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

salvador's submission: Average Rating:
My last vacation were in Oaxaca. This is a big state in Mexico. In that state there are many arquelogical places and have a great natural views. There you can eat a lot of things that you never imaging the test! Is a rich place to know and rest! I recomend visit Monte Alban. Is a well know international place. There are a lot of ruins and you can know about the mesoamerican culture! Is fantastic place and you can see all the valey in the top of the ruins. The other place to visit near that is Tule. Ther is a bg tree well know like Tules Tree. Is an ancient item near to 2000 years old!. Is enormous and wonderfull! :O Is you come to Mexico, dont forget to visist it!
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  • 周家
    Mochapoints: 357  |  Teacher Score: 184

    good!
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  • Juanita
    Mochapoints: 3634  |  Teacher Score: 553

    My last vacation were in Oaxaca.It's better to write: I spent my last vacation in Oaxaca.

    This is a big state in Mexico. In that state there are many arCHelogical places and IT haS a great natural views.  You can eat THERE a lot of thingS that you HAVE never imagED the TO test! Is IT'S a rich (?) place to know and rest! I recoMmend visitING Monte Alban. Is a well know international place. There are a lot of ruins and you can know LEARN about the mesoamerican culture! IT'S Is A fantastic place and you can see all the valey FROM in the top of the ruins. The other place to visit near that is Tule. TherE is a bIg tree well know like AS A Tules Tree. Is an ancient item near to 2000 years old!. IT'S (= IT IS) Is enormous and wonderfull! :O IFs you come to Mexico, don't forget to visist it!

     

    I will be  in Oaxaca in a few weeks :-)
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  • azjc
    Mochapoints: 382  |  Teacher Score: 97 (0%)

    Corrections are underlined:

    were in Oaxaca -> was in Oaxaca.

    arquelogical -> archeological (spelling)

    have a great natural views. -> has great natural views.

    never imaging the test. -> never imagined the taste.

    Is a rich place ... -> It is a rich place ...

    I recommend visit ... -> I recommend visiting ...

    Is a well know ... -> It is a well known ...

    and you can know about -> and you can learn about

    valey -> valley (spelling)

    Ther is a big tree well know like Tules Tree. -> There is a big tree that is well known like the Tules Tree.

    Is an ancient item near to -> It is an ancient item almost

    Is enormous -> It is enormous

    Is you come -> If you come

    visist -> visit (spelling)

     

    Good job! Nice story. Your English has improved a lot!
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