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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 2

Running Errands

Instructions: Write about a set of errands you have to do. Where do you need to go? When? With who?

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In the morning I should go to the bank pay the bills. Then I'll go to foodstore to buy some food. In the afternoon I'm seeing my friend. We're going to the mall. After shopping we usually eat out.
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  • Dave
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    In the morning I should go to the bank to pay the bills.  Then I'll go to the grocery store to buy some food.  In the afternoon I'm seeing my friend.  We're going to the mall.  After shopping we usually eat out.

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  • Athlete61
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    Great job. Small things

    1. ... to pay the bills.

    2. ... to the food store.... "grocery store" is more common. 

    Ed

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  • BlueSea
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    Great thanks.

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  • Amiran
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    Great

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