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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 4

Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Instructions: Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

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A quiet baby is sleeping in a cosy cradle. A crying toddle is sitting alone in the room. Poor thing! An exhausted woman is trying to fall asleep on soft pillows, but all in vain, as her other two kids are making a fuss. An angry husband is putting on his clean shoes. He is about to leave the house. What?! Is he going somewhere to entertain himself? Oh, no! He is going to buy flowers, toys and some beer. Guess for whom each item...
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  • Athlete61
    Mochapoints: 21503  |  Teacher Score: 19054 (100%)

    Excellent. Small things

    1. toddler

    2. Guess for whom each item is. 

    Ed

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  • Maria Darcy
    Mochapoints: 1864  |  Teacher Score: 58 (0%)

    very good.

    Submitted over a year ago

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