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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 2

Describe your street

Instructions: Look outside of your window and describe the movement that is happening on your street. Which direction are the people and the cars moving? How would a guest reach your home from the street?

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My favoured restaurant is a steak house in the city of Kassel. It's a nice place where you can enjoy your meal. Across the street is a bus station and a supermarket. Next door to the left is a jewlery and to the right a shoe shop.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • junemcneil
    Mochapoints: 8840  |  Teacher Score: 6128 (0%)

    In England it's spelt 'jewellery'

    And now I can return the compliment you gave me with my German submissions; excellent work!

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  • zuzice77
    Mochapoints: 1893  |  Teacher Score: 86

    Jewellery ..  BUT otherwise, EXCELLENT JOB :)

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Morrie
    Mochapoints: 37359  |  Teacher Score: 17571 (99%)

    junemcneil is right. Great job!

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  • Tita
    Mochapoints: 49853  |  Teacher Score: 23692 (99%)

    favorite

    across the street there is ..

    next door left..(there)is a jeWELRY(see the dictionnary)

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  • steveinaz
    Mochapoints: 69651  |  Teacher Score: 62514

    Excellent!  is the U.S. jewelry is the correct spelling.  Also, the last sentence ...to the right is a shoe shop.

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  • Danielle
    Mochapoints: 4418  |  Teacher Score: 1466 (0%)

    "...to the left is a jewelry store"

    good job!

    Submitted over a year ago

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