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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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Two houses are not black. They are grey. There are not three coins, there are five.
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  • robert michel
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    Exelent job. At the next time, put more text. ;-)

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  • ☻CoolSimple☻
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  • Mohammad
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    well done

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  • alhakhtar
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    You eather mean (They are not three coins , they are five) or (there are no three coins , they are five )

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  • Amr
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    Good work ,

    keep on & try to write more sentences .

     

    have a nice time

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  • IBRAHIM
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    Good

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  • Edicson
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    very well

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  • stan611
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    Gray in the US. Grey in the UK. See here:

    http://www.greyorgray.com/

    Use a comma when connecting two independent clauses with a word like "and." Otherwise use a semicolon or make two sentences.

    http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/g_commacomp.html

    (See my profile for resources that might be helpful to you.)

    Stan ^_*

    Two houses are not black. They are grey (or gray). There are not three coins; there are five.

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  • Nick
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    The two houses are not black.They are grey.There are five coins,not three.

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  • dan_103
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    Very clear and precise. Little note, though; 'grey' is the British English spelling of the color, in America, we spell it 'gray'.

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  • esteban
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    Very good.

     

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  • Moses Watch Te...
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    ok ! YOU NEED MORE PRACTICES BUT IS GOOD!

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  • (Nour) fayez
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    Your work is so neat.

    Actually brilliant jop,and you've got it,that's why you wrote only one sentence.

    All the best

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  • Steve
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    Good

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  • aliza.110
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    Two houses are not black,they are grey. There are not three coins, there are five.

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