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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 3

My occupation

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?

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The 1 may is an importent festival in China.It's the Labor Day ,we will have three days holiday,now the holiday will come half month later.My friends and I plan to have a trip.
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  • barrow4711
    Mochapoints: 1319  |  Teacher Score: 129 (0%)

    1  The 1st of May.

    2  important.

    3  holiday will come 2 weeks later.

    You need to leave a space after a comma  or a fullstop.

     

     
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  • Philip
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    The 1 may is an importent festival in China.It's the Labor Day ,we will have three days holiday,now the holiday will come half month later.My friends and I plan to have a trip.

    May 1st is an important festival day in China. It is called Labour Day. We have three days of holidays. This holiday will come in two weeks.
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