Describing Objects
Instructions:
Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1
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The telephone is in the box, and the radio is on the table. The cat is on the table, and the dog is in the box. The box is on the table, and the table is in the box.
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Grammatically correct. The box must be very large to have a table in it!
Hi Olga,
This is pretty good.The only comment is on the last two sentences here :
The box is on the table, and the table is in the box.
This sounds bit odd. Perhaps it would be better to say it this way :
The box is at the table and the table is next to the box.
I suggest that you practice more.
Bye