My occupation
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?
One important event in my country is "La Noche de San Juan" (The night of San Juan). San Juan is our capital name and the name of the saint of our city. We celebrate this event every year in june 24. We inherit this holiday from Spain. That night the families and friends go to the beaches and celebrate eating and drinking and of course, bathing in the sea. Many bands and musical groups go to the beaches and the people dance up to the dawn. The tradition says that at twelve o clock every body have to get to the sea to remove the bad luck and to ask for good desires.
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English Writing Exercise 
in that night ,not just that night. a'clock is not o clock.
in that night ,not just that night. o'clock is not oclock.
in that night ,not just that night. o'clock is not oclock.
Hi Mrs Kanorys :-)
We celebrate this event every year on June 24.
In that night, families and friends go to the beaches and celebrate by eating and drinking and of course bathing in the sea. Many bands and musical groups go to the beaches and people dance up to the dawn. The tradition says that at twelve o'clock every body has to get to the sea to remove the bad luck and to ask for good desires.
(in june 24.) on June 24th.
(every body) everybody
One important event in my country is "La Noche de San Juan" (The night of San Juan). San Juan is our capital name and it's the name of the Saint of our city as well. We celebrate this event every year in June 24. We inherit it from Spain. At that night the families and friends go to the beaches and celebrate eating and drinking and of course, swimming in the sea. Many bands and musical groups go to the beaches and the people dance up till the dawn. The legend says that at twelve o'clock every body has to get to the sea to remove the bad luck and to ask for good desires.
Already corrected. You didn't do a bad job, so keep it up like that :)
...and the people dance until dawn. To ask for good desires = to make wishes.
Dear Kanorys, the night of San Juan is certainly a big fiesta ! Living in France, I have made some short intrusions into Spain , just near the border . Spain is so exciting a country : all kinds of celebrations, bullfights, flamenco ...