Transportation
Instructions:
What kind of transportation do you use to get around town? What kind of transportation do you use to go on trips?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 1
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I am now living in a city. It's beautiful, and good for sightseeing. Usually I take a bus to tour around the city. As the bus moving on, I could see the views of different parts of the city. The buildings, gardens, and parks, or just the people, are all interesting to me. Sometimes I just get off the bus at certain stops, and walk back, that's my way of touring. From these tours, I could gain more understanding to the city and people. I really enjoy this.
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You did very well Grace, some minor mistakes, see my comments below.
I am now living in a city. It's beautiful, and good for sightseeing. Usually I take a bus to tour around the city. As the bus is moving on, I could can see the views of different parts of the city. The buildings, gardens, and parks, or just the people they are all interesting to me. Sometimes I just get off the bus at certain stops and walk back, that's my way of touring. From these tours, I could gain more understanding to the city and people. I really enjoy this.
good
well done :)
nice work...some mistake but already rectified.....
good Grace
Grace, everything looked very good. Excellent!
If I want to add a few comments,
1. As the bus moving on,====As the bus moves,
2. and walk back, that's my way====back. That is my...
3. gain more understandign to the city===understanding on the city
That is all.
Have a nice day.
Simon
As the bus is moving on, I .... . OR
As the bus moves on .... .
GOOD WRITTEN ENGLISH!
I am now living in a beautiful city. It is an excellent place for sightseeing because there is so much to see. Usually I take the tour bus which the tourists use to see the city. As the bus moves along between different landmarks, I saw the views of different parts of the city, the buildings, gardens, and the parks, or just the people, they were all interesting to me. Sometimes along the route I just get off the bus at certain stops, and then walk back to see what I missed, that's my way of touring around. From these tours, I gained a better understanding of the city and its people. I really enjoy doing the tours.