Going on Vacation
Instructions:
Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1
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ON this vacation i went to japan because it is prospered country and good puplic . And i went to summary club because it is contain fantastic programe to sport such as football,tenis,vollyball,swimming ...etc . What are going to do? i go to Touristic trips.
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On my last vacation, i went to Japan. I decided to go to Japan because, it is a very prosperous and good country, also, because i also went to the summary club because it contains fantasic programme such as, football, tennis, volleyball,swimming..etc.
That is the best of what i could make out of what you wrote.
thankful .......thank you so much
On this vacation I went to Japan because it is a prosperous country... And I went to a Summer club because it contained a fantastic programme of sport such as football, tennis, volleyball, swimming etc. What are you going to do? I go on tourist trips.
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