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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 3

What are people doing?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. I am eating food at the table. I am not sleeping in bed.

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The woman is drinking milk in the kitchen.She is not sleeping in the bed.The man is reading book at the table.He is not watching TV. The boy is swimming at the swimming pool.He is not working in the car. The girl is listening to the music.she is not playing at the garden. I am watching movie in my room.I am not going to shopping. You are standing at the door. You are not sitting at the door.
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  • Rodrigo Usizima
    Mochapoints: 24070  |  Teacher Score: 6268 (98%)

    The woman is drinking milk in the kitchen.She is not sleeping in the bed.The man is reading a book at the table.He is not watching TV. The boy is swimming at the swimming pool.He is not working in the car. The girl is listening to the music. She is not playing at the garden. I am watching movie in my room. I am not going to shopping. You are standing at the door. You are not sitting on the chair. (On the last sentence, it'd be better)

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    Congratulations SAEED!!!

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • SAEED
    Mochapoints: 2589  |  Teacher Score: 719

    Thanks Rodrigo for revewing my exercise

    i am very happy to see you here

    Thanks and regards

    Saeed

    Submitted over a year ago
  • joao fernandes
    Mochapoints: 1115  |  Teacher Score: 49 (0%)

    very well... it's ok...

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  • alisson
    Mochapoints: 1755  |  Teacher Score: 106 (0%)
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