Describing the weather
Instructions:
Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3
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1. 前天是雨天，很冷。我戴着帽子和雨衣。The day before yesterday was raining and cold. I’m wearing a hat and a raincoat.
2. 2.昨天是多云天气，很冷。所以我戴着围巾。Yesterday was cloudy and cold. So I am wearing a scarf.
3.今天我戴着太阳镜，因为天气暖和、阳光明媚。I am wearing sunglasses today.Because weather it’s warm and sunny.
3明天天气晴朗，阳光明媚。我戴着太阳镜。Tomorrow weather is clear and sunny. I am wearing sunglasses.
4.后天会乌云密布和下雨，我需要戴着围巾和雨伞。The day after tomorrow is rain and cloudy. I am wearing scarf and an umbrella.
Thank you! thank you for helping me check my work! 谢谢！
2. 2.昨天是多云天气，很冷。所以我戴着围巾。Yesterday was cloudy and cold. So I am wearing a scarf.
3.今天我戴着太阳镜，因为天气暖和、阳光明媚。I am wearing sunglasses today.Because weather it’s warm and sunny.
3明天天气晴朗，阳光明媚。我戴着太阳镜。Tomorrow weather is clear and sunny. I am wearing sunglasses.
4.后天会乌云密布和下雨，我需要戴着围巾和雨伞。The day after tomorrow is rain and cloudy. I am wearing scarf and an umbrella.
Thank you! thank you for helping me check my work! 谢谢！
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The day before yesterday was raining and cold, I wore (past tense) a hat and a raincoat.
Yesterday was cloudy and cold, so I wore (past tense) a scarf.
I am wearing sunglasses today, because the weather is warm and sunny.
Tomorrow's weather will be clear and sunny, I am going to(future tense) wear sunglasses.
The day after tomorrow will be rainy and cloudy, I am going to(future tense)wear a scarf and carry an umbrella.
Great work Lucy, keep practicing
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Well done! Good stuff!
In addition to Don's good corrections above, here is another possible way to write it...
1. The day before yesterday was raining and cold. I was wearing a hat and a raincoat.
2. Yesterday was cloudy and cold, so I was wearing a scarf.
3. I am wearing sunglasses today because weather it’s warm and sunny weather. Tomorrow's weather is going to be clear and sunny. I will be wearing sunglasses.
4. The day after tomorrow is going to be raining and cloudy. I will be wearing scarf and will use an umbrella.
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Not bad! Care has to be taken to use correct verb tenses. The last sentence does not reflect the Chinese well, 后天会乌云密布和下雨，我需要戴着围巾和雨伞. Here are my suggestions.
The day before yesterday it was raining and cold. I wore a hat and a raincoat. Yesterday was cloudy and cold, so I wore a scarf. I am wearing sunglasses today because it is warm and sunny. Tomorrow the weather will be clear and sunny. I’m going to wear sunglasses. The day after tomorrow the sky will be heavily overcast, and it’s going to rain. I’ll need to wear a scarf and carry an umbrella.
(1) The day before yesterday was rainy and cold, so I wore a hat and a raincoat. (2) Yesterday was cloudy and cold, so I wore a scarf. (3) I am wearing sunglasses today, because the weather is warm and sunny. (4) Tomorrow the weather will be clear and sunny, so I will wear sunglasses. (5) The day after tomorrow is going to be rainy and cloudy, so I am going to wear a scarf and carry an umbrella. Thank you! Thank you for helping me check my work!
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(1) The day before yesterday was rainy and cold, so I wore a hat and a raincoat. (2) Yesterday was cloudy and cold, so I wore a scarf. (3) I am wearing sunglasses today, because the weather is warm and sunny. (4) Tomorrow the weather will be clear and sunny, so I will wear sunglasses. (5) The day after tomorrow is going to be rainy and cloudy, so I am going to wear a scarf and carry an umbrella. Thank you! Thank you for helping me check my work!
Great try,I think your friend Don has done all the corrections . English grammar is very difficult.
Hello Lucy,
You did very well. I made some revisions. I hope it helps.
Best wishes
David
1. Yesterday, it was raining and cold. I wore a hat and a raincoat. I also wore a pretty scarf.
3. I am wearing sunglasses today because the weather is warm and sunny. Tomorrow's weather will also be clear and sunny. I will be wearing sunglasses.
4. The day after tomorrow will be rainy and cloudy. I will be wearing a scarf and carrying an umbrella.
Hi lucy.黎,
Hey! You changed your name, and you changed your picture! But, you still are doing the same good work. :-) Come on, lucy!!
1. 前天是雨天，很冷。我戴着帽子和雨衣。The day before yesterday was rainy [adjective] and cold. I wore [past tense] a hat and (a) raincoat.
2. 昨天是多云天气，很冷。所以我戴着围巾。Yesterday was cloudy and cold, so I wore [past tense] a scarf.
3. 今天我戴着太阳镜，因为天气暖和、阳光明媚。Today, I am wearing sunglasses, because the weather (/ it’s) warm and sunny.
3. 明天天气晴朗，阳光明媚。我戴着太阳镜。Tomorrow, the weather (/ it) will be [future tense] clear and sunny. I will wear (/ will be wearing) [future tense] sunglasses.
4. 后天会乌云密布和下雨，我需要戴着围巾和雨伞。The day after tomorrow will be [future tense] rainy [adjective] and cloudy. I will need to wear [future tense] a scarf and carry an umbrella.
Thank you! Thank you for helping me check my work! 谢谢！
agree with the above statements,Lucy you are very popular.
Great job!!!
Thanks!!
I am wearing a scarf and an umbrella.
don't start a sentence with because
good job =]
As already mentioned, pay attention to the verb tense. You are doing fantastic.
I learn a great deal from your writing..
谢谢你。
加油！！！
You have some real great comments. You can learn alot from that.
Great work.
I’m wore a hat and a raincoat.So I wore a scarf.
I am wearing sunglasses today, because the weather is warm and sunny.
The day after tomorrow it will be cloudy with rain. I will wear a scarf and use an umbrella.
The day before yesterday was raining and cold. I’m wearing a hat and a raincoat.
Good
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Yesterday was cloudy and cold. So I am wearing a scarf.
Good
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I am wearing sunglasses today because the weather is warm and sunny.
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Tomorrow weather is clear and sunny. I am wearing sunglasses.
Good
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On the day after tomorrow it will rain and be cloudy. I am wearing scarf and an umbrella.
GOOD WORK!
The day before yesterday it was raining and cold. I wore a hat and a raincoat. Yesterday, it was cloudy and cold, so I am wore a scarf. I am wearing sunglasses today because the weather is warm and sunny. Tomorrow, the weather will be clear and sunny. I will wear sunglasses. The day after tomorrow, it is suppose to be cloudy and rainy. I will wear a scarf and use an umbrella. Thank you! Thank you for helping me check my work!
Hi lucy,
Enough reviews before I could get here.
Take care,
Edith
说天气怎么样时，主语要用it，而不能象说中文那样把时间状语当成主语来说。要注意这一点
excellent work, just some changes to the verb tense.
1. The day before yesterday was raining and cold, so I wore a hat and a raincoat.
2. Yesterday was cloudy and cold, so I wore a scarf.
3. I am wearing sunglasses today, because the weather is warm and sunny.
4. Tomorrow the weather will be clear and sunny so I will wear sunglasses.
5. The day after tomorrow will be rainy and cloudy, so I will wear a scarf and carry an umbrella.
Excellent work
Lucy great job. Everything has already been well covered. 加油。
Your friend was righ, but still over all you all do great! I always love howyou step out of youe box. ou write both chinese and english. Great for the readers. Hao ji le!