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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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I went to festival with my family last weekend.
It was clear and warm, so we can enjoy very much.
That place is near the my mother's house.
We can get there by walk.
We will visit again next year.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • liana
    Mochapoints: 4350  |  Teacher Score: 706 (0%)

    I went to festival with my family last weekend. It was clear and warm, so we can enjoy very much. That place is near the my mother's house. We can get there by walk. We will visit there again next year.

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • bezoomniy
    Mochapoints: 3846  |  Teacher Score: 1535 (0%)

    It was clear and warm, so we can could enjoy very much. (this is concordance of time)

    That place is near the my mother's house. (you should use either "the" or a possessive pronoun "my mother's"

    Very good. Keep it up! I wish I could see pictures of this festival :)

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Johnny
    Mochapoints: 4856  |  Teacher Score: 1447 (100%)

    I went to festival with my family last weekend. It was clear and warm, so we could enjoy very much. That place was near to  my mother's house. We could get there by walk. We will visit again next year.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • azmi_412
    Mochapoints: 760  |  Teacher Score: 472 (0%)

    I  went to a festival with my family last weekend. The day was clear and warm, so we enjoyed it very much. The location where the festival was held is near to my mother's house. We could get there just by walking.  We will visit the festival again next year.

     

    Submitted over a year ago

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