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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 5

Directions to your house

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, provide directions for a guest from the nearest bus stop to your house. Which direction should your guest go? Where should he turn? What will he see on his way to your house? How will he recognize your house?

hong aksoy's submission: Average Rating:
The last school I attened is a computer school. It name is Pengcheng Computer School. It is not big but the teaching facilities and teacheres are very nice. I graduated the next year. I learned how to use Microsoft Office and other software. I can set up website now. It's fun and very useful.
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  • Kindness
    Mochapoints: 373452  |  Teacher Score: 362237 (99%)

    The last school I attened was a computer school. Its name was Pengcheng Computer School. It was not big but the teaching facilities and teachers were very nice. I graduated the next year. I learned how to use Microsoft Office and other sorts of software. I can set up website now. It's fun and very useful.

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  • silviak
    Mochapoints: 57879  |  Teacher Score: 17769 (100%)

    I agree with Kindness' corrections.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Don Moore
    Mochapoints: 263777  |  Teacher Score: 261693 (100%)

    The last school I attended is a computer school. It's name is Pengcheng Computer School. It is not big but the teaching facilities and teacheres are very nice. I graduated the next year. I learned how to use Microsoft Office and other software. I can set up website now. It's fun and very useful.

    This required only a couple corrections.  The only way you can find them is to compare this with your original.  I found it to be very well written.  Can you please tell me how you are addressed by your friends? Which name do they use...Hong or Aksoy? It doesn't look like a typical Chinese name.

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  • magda
    Mochapoints: 7157  |  Teacher Score: 902

    good

    Submitted over a year ago

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