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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today is wednesday, 2009 april 22, autumn season. The weather is cloudy (maybe it rains later), not so cold (at least to me), the temperature will be oscillating between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, São Paulo state.
Tomorrow, as i can see on this site: ctmail@climatempo.net , it will be similar today.
Well... i must confess that i appeciate too much this kind of weather and the autumn season too.
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  • Graham
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    Today is Wednesday, April 22nd 2009 april 22, and it is autumn season. The weather is cloudy (maybe it will rain later), not so cold (at least to for me), the temperature will be oscillating between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, São Paulo state. Tomorrow, as I can see on this site: ctmail@climatempo.net , it will be similar to today. Well... I must confess that I really appreciate too much this kind of weather and the autumn season too.

    Good effort.

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  • Daniel
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    It's autumn season and today is Wednesday 22nd April, 2009. The weather is cloudy (it will probably rain later), not too cold (at least for me), the temperature will be varying between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, SP.  Tomorrow, the weather will be sililiar to todays' as predicted on the website:ctmail@climatempo.net ,  Well... I must confess that I really love  this kind of weather and the autumn season.

    Hope you like this style of writing.

    Daniel

     

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  • Daniel
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    It's autumn season and today is Wednesday 22nd April, 2009. The weather is cloudy (it will probably rain later), not too cold (at least for me), the temperature will be varying between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, SP.  Tomorrow, the weather will be sililiar to todays' as predicted on the website:ctmail@climatempo.net ,  Well... I must confess that I really love  this kind of weather and the autumn season.

    Hope you like this style of writing.

    Daniel

     

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    It's autumn season and today is Wednesday 22nd April, 2009. The weather is cloudy (it will probably rain later), not too cold (at least for me), the temperature will be varying between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, SP.  Tomorrow, the weather will be sililiar to todays' as predicted on the website:ctmail@climatempo.net ,  Well... I must confess that I really love  this kind of weather and the autumn season.

    Hope you like this style of writing.

    Daniel

     

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  • Daniel
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    It's autumn season and today is Wednesday 22nd April, 2009. The weather is cloudy (it will probably rain later), not too cold (at least for me), the temperature will be varying between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, SP.  Tomorrow, the weather will be sililiar to todays' as predicted on the website:ctmail@climatempo.net ,  Well... I must confess that I really love  this kind of weather and the autumn season.

    Hope you like this style of writing.

    Daniel

     

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