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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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You leave the last place where？It away from your home how far ？How much money to spend there ？
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  • Noa
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  • Noa
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    Very bad.You have wrong tenses in grammar.
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  • fixz
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  • JB
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    Hi Alan, The supreme goal in speaking another language is to convey your idea in that specific language. I’m not saying that grammar in not important. I’m only saying that grammar control the quality of the communication, but not the communication itself. The most important thing in communication is to be bold, to be daring e courageous, to take risks and commit mistakes, and you did that. And your text is not so bad. I’d only suggest some changes. “Where have you been last week? How long have you been out of home? How much did you spent in your vacation and where did you go?” Congratulations!
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  • Mariano José
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    Ok, the words are all well. But the sentences make little sense since you didn't respect the grammar. I know it's difficult, but maybe you should read again the examples in the lesson...
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  • Laura
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    Tell us about your last vacation, please. Good luck!
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  • alan
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    I went to the mountain, which from my home to about two-hour car ride, I spent a few dozen yuan.
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