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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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I like so much of chocolate. Cake I like too but somewhere don't have good cakes so I don't buy if I don't know the place.
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  • JAP
    Mochapoints: 938  |  Teacher Score: 509 (0%)
    Hi, well done. Your text is understandable, although you can improve some aspects. Here are some suggestions: - "I like chocolate so much". This way is neater because the action of 'like' falls directly on 'chocolate', and there is no need to use the word 'of' here. - "I like cake too". Don't write the direct object before the active subject. If you want to use passive tense you should say "Cake is liked by me" (of course, in this case this is not a correct sentence). Another way to say it correctly is: "Cake, I like it too" though it's not as usual. - "But there are no good cakes anywhere". This is a better way to say that "not all places (bakeries) have good cakes". Good job, keep the good work and you'll improve very quickly. Bye.
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    I like chocolate so much . I like cake too but somePLACES don't have good cakes so I don't buy THEM if I don't know the place. OTIMO NOTA 10
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