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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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if i am at a cafe,i'd like to order black coffee& lemon ,i will aslo order sandwich
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  • Desi
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    Mochapoints: 3624  |  Teacher Score: 1015
    If I am at a cafe, I'd like to order black coffee and lemon. I will also order a sandwich.
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  • udhaya
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    i'd means??? , i had or i would , i think - i would is the right one
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  • MaSTeR_740
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    goood
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  • Saifu
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    I think a sentence begins with capital letter.
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  • julia
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    All friends thank you!
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  • Peter
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  • Peter
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    Hen hao, Julie. When I am at a cafe, I like to order black coffee and lemon. I also sometimes order a sandwich. When talking about habitual actions, it is best to use the simple present tense rather than the conditional or future. Remember, the word "I" is always capitalized.
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  • rats_star
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    Peter is right! I fully concur with his suggestions!
    Submitted over a year ago

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