How many objects?
Instructions:
Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5
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The girl has 25 flowers and 7 candles. The boy has 5 toy-trains and 1 car. The girl has 5 dolls and 2 teddy-bears. The woman has 5000 roubles in her wallet. She has a bottle of wine in her hand. He has 8 fish and 2 cats at home. My friend has one big dog.
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Excellent!
You don't need the hyphen (-) in "toy trains" or "teddy bears".
It's very good!
Great. I agree with Jet, it is not neccessary to have hyphens in your submission.
One other very small point. In your last sentence it is more usual in English to say 'a' big dog rather than 'one' big dog.
Other than that, good job.
I agree with Jet..
Well done! Very good!