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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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I'm a student now,and I wanted to be a police men .
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  • Charley Garrett
    Mochapoints: 805  |  Teacher Score: 542 (0%)
    Hanya, Very good writing. Just one little point to share with you, okay? "policeman" or "policewoman". When it is one person, it's spelled "man", instead of "men". You're going very fast! Charley
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  • Charley Garrett
    Mochapoints: 805  |  Teacher Score: 542 (0%)
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  • Charley Garrett
    Mochapoints: 805  |  Teacher Score: 542 (0%)
    Hanya, I think it didn't save my last comment. You write very well. This time there is just a point of spelling. "policeman" or "policewoman". When it is just one person, it is spelled "man" instead of "men". You're progressing very fast. Charley
    Submitted over a year ago
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