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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 2

What are you doing this week?

Instructions: What are you doing this week? What activities are you doing? When? Which days will be the busiest?

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Today is monday and I am doing all my and chores , tomorrow tuesday I will go to my swiming and tennis lessons ,On friday day will be the busiest, I'll go on excursions into the country side.
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  • josssem
    Mochapoints: 16576  |  Teacher Score: 14019

    Hi Vanesa. Today is Monday and I am doing all my and chores. Tomorrow, Tuesday I will go to my swimming and tennis lessons. On Friday day I will be the busiest.  I'll go on an excursions into the country side.

     Day and moinths are always written with initial capitals. Excellent job

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  • Batu
    Mochapoints: 43152  |  Teacher Score: 8586 (98%)

    i agree with josssem except

    Friday will be my busiest day.

    I think this is better.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Billy Woo
    Mochapoints: 160403  |  Teacher Score: 144284 (100%)

    Today is Monday(Days of the week always take capital letter) and I am doing all my chores; tomorrow is Tuesday and I will go to my swimming and tennid lessons. Friday will be the busiest because I 'll go on aN excursion in the countryside.

    Muy bien hecho. Sigue asi ! Hay que practicar mucho para mejorar.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Gilgy
    Mochapoints: 146860  |  Teacher Score: 141950 (99%)

    Friday during the day will be busiest

    Submitted over a year ago

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