Describe your street
Instructions:
Look outside of your window and describe the movement that is happening on your street. Which direction are the people and the cars moving? How would a guest reach your home from the street?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 2
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I'm a waitress. Our restaurant is along the route 45.
That is next to a supermarket. There are many store around the restaurant.
That is next to a supermarket. There are many store around the restaurant.
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I'm a waitress. Our restaurant is along the route 45. That It is next to a supermarket. There are many stores around the restaurant.
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Hi wo,ow san:
In the 3rd sentence you should say "It is (or it's) next to a supermarket. "
In the last sentence, store would be plural and has an s (stores) on the end. In Japanese I think many already indicates plurality.
It looks like you are making good progress with your studies. Ganbatte.
tom
I'm a waitress. Our restaurant is _on _Route 45,_ _ next to a supermarket. There are many stores around {it = the restaurant}.