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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

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I am a tall man. I am a middle age. I like to study English, because I will communicate to many people around the world.
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  • Karashemshek
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  • Karashemshek
    Mochapoints: 3667  |  Teacher Score: 3262 (0%)
    Hello Somkidth Your writing is good. Here are my comments for you. I am a tall, middle age man. (Make your first two sentences into one.) I like to study English, because it will (help) me communicate with many people around the world. I added the word "help" and replaced "to" with the word "with" Hope this is helpful Karashemshek
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  • Dave46
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    I am a tall middle age man. I like to study English, because I will be able to communicate with many people around the world. Good !
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