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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3

Describe your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?

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I have a wonderful family . There are four people in my family .My parents and my older brother .My parents have retired .My older brother larger 5 years than mine .
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  • 守望家园
    Mochapoints: 128  |  Teacher Score: 25 (0%)
    1 第三,五句中的older改为elder 2 最后一句改为My elder brother is 5 years older than me
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  • debs
    Mochapoints: 931  |  Teacher Score: 368 (0%)
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    Mochapoints: 931  |  Teacher Score: 368 (0%)
    Hi Bossy ! Very good !! Better to say ' my older brother is 5 years older than me'. take care debs
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