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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 5

Comparisons and Superlatives

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from the lesson, compare a set of objects. EX. This dog is bigger than that dog.

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A chair is bigger than a stool but smaller than a couch.

A ship is the heaviest vehicle.

A train is more fast than a car ,but an aeroplane is the fastest mean of travelling.

it is better to keep short hair because it is difficiult to manage long hair.

The industrial revolution is the cause of constuction of sky scrapper buildings ,otherwise every one know that only normall single storey buidings with a small lawn are better for living.

A heavier vehicle is better for a long drive as compare to light vehicle.
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  • Arket
    Mochapoints: 60360  |  Teacher Score: 26176 (100%)

    A chair is bigger than a stool but smaller than a couch. A ship is the heaviest vehicle. A train is more faster than a car ,but an aeroplane is the fastest mean (??) of travelling. It is better to keep short hair because it is difficult to manage long hair. The industrial revolution is the cause of constuction of sky scrapper buildings ,otherwise everyone knows that only normall single storey buidings with a small lawn are better for living. A heavier vehicle is better for a long drive as comparing to a light vehicle.

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  • Arvonius
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    A chair is bigger than a stool, but is smaller than a couch. A ship is the heaviest vehicle. A train is faster than a car, but an aeroplane is the fastest means of travelling. It is better to keep hair short,  because it is difficult to manage long hair. The industrial revolution is the cause of the construction of sky scrapper buildings, as every one knows that only normall single storey buildings with a small lawn are better for living in.  A heavier vehicle is better for a long drive as compared to a light vehicle.

    A very good effort, Qaiser!

    Please take good note of the changes made to help you.

    Please check your spelling before you submit exercises.

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  • LUZCITA
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    OK Friend. That's right! Excellent only you should check your  spelling before send it.

    A chair is bigger than a stool, but is smaller than a couch. A ship is the heaviest vehicle. A train is faster than a car, but an aeroplane is the fastest means of travelling. It is better to keep short hair,  because it is difficult to manage long hair. The industrial revolution is the cause of the construction of sky scrapper buildings, as every one knows that only normall single storey buildings with a small lawn are better for living in.  A heavier vehicle is better for a long drive as compared to a light vehicle.

    KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB!

    CONGRATULATIONS! IT IS A VERY BIG TEXT.

    GOOD LUCK!

    KISSES

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  • stan611
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    I see several spelling errors. See corrections below.

    ALWAYS leave a space after a punctuation mark but no space before the mark.

    Please check carefully before submitting.

    Stan ^_*

    A chair is bigger than a stool but smaller than a couch. A ship is the heaviest vehicle. A train is faster more fast than a car, but an airplane aeroplane is the fastest means of traveling. travelling. It it is better to keep short hair because it is difficult difficiult to manage long hair. The Industrial Revolution industrial revolution is the cause of construction constuction of skyscraper sky scrapper buildings, otherwise everyone every one knows that only normal normall single story storey buildings buidings with a small lawns are better for living. A heavier vehicle is better for a long drive as compared to a light vehicle.

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  • felicia alexand...
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    ...is faster...an airplane...

    ...it is difficult...

    ...everyone knows...

    ...comparing to a light one.

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  • shirin
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    Good job I agree with Arket

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  • crmla2
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     A chair is bigger than a stool, but is smaller than a couch. A ship is the heaviest vehicle. A train is faster than a car, but an aeroplane is the fastest means of travelling. It is better to keep short hair because it is difficult to manage long hair. The industrial revolution is the cause of the construction of sky scraper buildings , as every one knows that only normal single storey bidings with a small lawn are better for living in. A heavier vehicle is better for a long drive comparing to a light vehicle.

    Very good,  as Arvonius said, Please check your spelling before you submit exercises.

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  • QAISER
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    I am proud of my luck that I have friends like you people.

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  • Laura
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    Good! All the mistakes have been already corrected by Avronius and I fully agree with him. Keep up the good work. Good luck!

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  • ilma
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    Hi,.good job.

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  • Gilgy
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    I agree with the removal of 'only' here. it would change the meaning of the sentence to something else.

    otherwise everyone every one knows that only normal normall single story storey buildings buidings with a small lawns are better for living.

    Submitted over a year ago

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