Describe your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3
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In 2002 I got married and became the head of my family.
Now there are 4 people in my family. They are my wife, my daughter, my son and me.
My wife is the same age as mine, so sometimes I grumble in her presence that I'm living with an aunt.
My daughter is 5 years old and the younger is a 10 month old baby.
Before I got married, my family was consist of my parents, my younger sister and me.
My parents come to my house everyday to see their lovely grandson and granddaughter.
But my younger sister couldn't because she has been living in Germany since 1999.
She is planning to come to Korea this summer -even though she will stay home just for short period-, and now we are looking forward to meet her again.
Now there are 4 people in my family. They are my wife, my daughter, my son and me.
My wife is the same age as mine, so sometimes I grumble in her presence that I'm living with an aunt.
My daughter is 5 years old and the younger is a 10 month old baby.
Before I got married, my family was consist of my parents, my younger sister and me.
My parents come to my house everyday to see their lovely grandson and granddaughter.
But my younger sister couldn't because she has been living in Germany since 1999.
She is planning to come to Korea this summer -even though she will stay home just for short period-, and now we are looking forward to meet her again.
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In 2002 I got married and became the head of my family. Now there are 4 people in my family. There are my wife, my daughter, my son and me. My wife is the same age as mine me, so sometimes I grumble in her presence that I'm living with an aunt. My daughter is 5 years old and my younger son is a 10 month old baby. Before I got married, my family was consisted of my parents, my younger sister and me. My parents come to my house everyday to see their lovely grandson and granddaughter. But my younger sister couldn't can't because she has been living in Germany since 1999. She is planning to come to Korea this summer -even though she will stay at home just for a short period-, and now we are looking forward to meeting her again.
Very good.