Describe Your Home Tools
Instructions:
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5
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I live in Rio de Janeiro and in this season the weather is very confused here. Yesterday was hot but in the night was cold.
Today the weather is cloudy, but now has sun and is hot.
I think tonight will be cold again, but I´m not sure about this.
Today the weather is cloudy, but now has sun and is hot.
I think tonight will be cold again, but I´m not sure about this.
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I live in Rio de Janeiro and in this season the weather is very confused here. Yesterday it was hot but in the at night it was cold. Today the weather is cloudy, but now has it is sunny and is hot. I think tonight will be cold again, but I´m not sure about this.
Thadeu,
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I live in Rio de Janeiro and in this season (you can specify what season you're talking about) the weather is very confused here. Yesterday was hot but it got cold at night (this should sound better, because it gives the idea that yesterday during the day was hot). Today the weather is cloudy, but now the sun is out and it's hot. I think tonight will be cold again, but I'm not sure about this.
Great job!