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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 3

Activities: Today and Yesterday

Instructions: Using the irregular verbs from this lesson, write sentences in the present continuous and past simple tense about six people: a man and a woman, a boy and a girl, you and me. Ex: A man is swimming in the lake now. A man swam in the lake yesterday.

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I live in Hefei,China. There are all kinds of restaurants here. And there're lots of specials in each reataurant. Especially Sichuan food are here and there. My favorite dish is SUANCAI FISH there(I'm sorry that iI can't type the name of this dish in English)It's really delicious....
I like tomato and egg soup best. And I also love rice,dumlings,and so on.
Welcome to Hefei. I'll show you the great specials in many reataurants here.
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  • mrlum_2001
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  • Beezhan
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    Very nice. It is completely understandable. I have put a few {corrections} in to help it sound more natural. I hope it helps! Have a good day, Beezhan I live in Hefei, China. There are all kinds of restaurants here. And there're {use "there are" - "there're" is not an abbreviation we use} lots of specials in each reataurant. Especially Sichuan food are here and there{"Sichuan food is especially good here" - the extra "and there" is not needed}. My favorite dish is SUANCAI FISH there {you don't need to use the extra "there"} (I'm sorry that iI can't type the name of this dish in English) It's really delicious.... {your English is excellent - I think I could order it if I were to visit Hefei} I like tomato and egg soup best. And I also love rice, {remember to put spaces after yoru commas ", "} dumlings,and so on. Welcome to Hefei. I'll show you the great specials in many reataurants here. Very good!
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  • shuangyu
    Mochapoints: 635  |  Teacher Score: 122 (0%)
    Thank you very much. I'll try my best to learn English well.
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  • Henrique _ 恩裏克
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    Good Job ^^ and, i prayed for Sichuan... Sour Vegetable Fish Soup (Suancai Yu, 酸菜鱼) ^^ zaijian
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  • shuangyu
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    Thanks a lot. hehe
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