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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 2

Grocery Shopping

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the groceries that you bought during your last grocery shopping trip. Did you go to one store to buy everything? What was your most expensive item? What was your least expensive item? Did you buy an item that you haven’t tried before? What is one dish that you will be making this week using these groceries?

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There is a huge dragon in the faraway East. It is my motherland---China. It is located in the eastern part of Asia, the Pacific West Bank. China's land area has 9,600,000 square kilometers. China has long coastline and boundary line. North Korea, Korea and Japan are east of China; Russia and Mongolia are north of China; Afghanistan, Pakistan, India, Nepal and Bhutan are west of China; Myanmar, Laos and Vietnam are south of China.
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  • Lee Kong
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    That's very good!
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  • Mônica
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    Excellent text!
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  • Sam Peters
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    Very good Anqi. Excellent!
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  • rosemead
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    Good  detail and information .

    Excellent .
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  • notonlyart
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    China is spread over a land admeasuring 9,600,000 square kilometers.

    China has long a coastline and boundary line.

    North Korea, Korea and Japan are in the east of China; Russia and Mongolia are in the north of China; Afghanistan, Pakistan, India, Nepal and Bhutan are in the west of China; Myanmar, Laos and Vietnam are in the south of China.

    (Mark the use of "in the")
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  • tsweezy
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    Good job!
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  • 世界公民 BR TR
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    very good
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