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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

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My last vacations where in summer of 2007. It was unforgettable. I and my friends from university visited Crimea peninsula. We were living in good living-conditions on the coast of Black Sea. Also we were learning a history of Sebastopol - great city of Russian history.This journey was wonderful!
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  • Leonardo
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    My last vacations take place in the summer of 2007. My friends and I (from the university).... We were staying in a comfortable place beside the coast of ... well done Paul.
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  • Immonique
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    My last vacation was in the Summer of 2007. My friends from university and I, visited the Crimea...... We ha good living conditions on the coast of The Black Sea. We were also learning the history of Sebastopol, a great city of Russian history. That journey was wonderful!
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  • Athlete61
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    Paul, Хорошо. 1. My last vacation was in the summer of 2007. 2. My friends from the university and I visited the Crimea Peninsula. 3. We had good living conditions (no hyphen)... 4. Also we learned about the history of Sebastopol... 5. This is a very minor comment to explain the subtleties of english... "This trip was wonderful" is more informal and implies a vacation or travel for enjoyment. "Journey" is often used to describe a trip where one discovers something or where things unfold. "Journey" is also more often used in literature rather than spoken english. Great work! Ed
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  • Dave
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    "My last vacation was in the summer of 2007. It was unforgettable. My friends and I from the university visited the Crimea peninsula. We had (very) nice accomodations on the coast of the Black Sea. We learned the history of Sevastopol, a great city of Ukraine and an important city in Russian history. The trip was wonderful!"
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  • Rebecca
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    Nice work! Just a few errors. :) блага! (I think that's right. hehe)
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  • Ron English
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    Paul, I am going to rewrite this for you. It's OK but needs a few minor changes. My last vacation was in the summer of 2007. It was unforgettable. My friends and I, from the university, visited Crimea Peninsula. We had good living-conditions on the coast of Black Sea. Also, we were learning the history of Sebastopol, the great city of Russian history. This journey was wonderful!
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  • likuna66
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    bien :)
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