Transportation
Instructions:
What kind of transportation do you use to get around town? What kind of transportation do you use to go on trips?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 1
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In week last i went to Rio de Janeiro.
I get the second bus that pass in my street.
I get the second bus that pass in my street.
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Last week I went to Rio de Janeiro. I took the second bus that passed on my street.
Congratulations on having completed this writing exercise, it is quite well done! As other users have already left you very useful commentary, I would encourage you simply to continue practicing your writing keeping three things in mind: (1) Always work on improving and expanding your linguistic repertoire, in both vocabulary and grammar, (2) Always respect the rules of capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, (3) Always think the subject through thoroughly, answering completely and appropriately to the question asked. Best of luck with your future studies!
In last week i went to Rio de Janeiro. I got the second bus that passed in my street.
Last week, meu caro. Todas as palavras escritas corretamente, muito bem!