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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 1

Transportation

Instructions: What kind of transportation do you use to get around town? What kind of transportation do you use to go on trips?

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I am getting on the taxi when I want to get around town. But when I getting on plane that is mean I'm traveling to another country. when I want to increase my Adrenaline I'm getting on my motorcycle and take a crazy around in my town square. I don't like train because it's so noisy and boring for this I'm not getting on it not even once in my life. but I don't know maybe one day I will.
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  • Edwin Núñez
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    I am getting on the take a taxi when I want to get around town.

    But when I getting on a plane, that is means I'm traveling to another country.

    When I want to increase my adrenaline, I'm getting on ride my motorcycle and take a crazy (what do you mean, "and go crazy"?) around in my the town square.

    I don't like trains because it's they are so noisy and boring.

    for this I'm not getting on it not even once in my life.  That is why I have never been on one in my life.

    but I don't know

    But one never knows.  Maybe one day I will someday/one of these days.

    Keep practicing. What you write is understood. You just need more exposure to the English way of thinking.
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  • amel
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    I take a taxi when I want to get around town. But when I'm traveling to another country I take the plane. when I want to increase my Adrenaline I ride my motorcycle and take a crazy round in my town. I don't like train because it's so noisy and boring. Because of this I’ve never taken the train, not even once in my life. But who knows, maybe one day I will.
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  • germanwannabe
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    I take a taxi when I want to get around town, but when I ride a plane, that means I'm traveling to another country. When I want to increase my adrenaline, I get on my motorcycle and go crazy around my town square. I don't like the train because it's so noisy and boring, so I will not ride it, maybe not even once in my life. But, I don't know, maybe one day I will.

    GOOD JOB! You kno your vocab, which is most important, but your grammar is slacking. Don't worry, at least I can understand you! :)
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  • Johanny
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    You made a few mistakes! :-) but you are improving your english!!
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