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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 3

Staying at a Hotel

Instructions: Use the vocabulary from this lesson to describe a time you stayed in a hotel. Were you on a business trip or vacation? Did you order room service? Did you use their computers? Did you have breakfast in bed? Etc.

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Last year I had been the hotel is named Jin long Hotel for working for three days.
Before I had got there,I haven't Scheduled . The first day I had got there ,I had had my breakfast and worked in the hotel. After three days I had finished my job and then I had gone .
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  • sarahmouse
    Mochapoints: 3521  |  Teacher Score: 84 (0%)

    Very good! However, a native would write more like..

     "Last year I stayed in a hotel named the Jin long Hotel to work for three days. Before I had arrived there, I had not scheduled. The first day I was there, I had had my breakfast and worked in the hotel. After three days I had finished my job and then I had gone."

    Try also "I had not scheduled before I arrived there."

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  • Sandy
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    Just so so !you should  keep trying!

    Last year I had been working for the hotel which named Jin long .I was stay there for three days.I haven't plan well before I went there.I had have breakfast and worked in the hotel .Three days later,I have finished my job and went home.

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  • Cathy (红)
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    the first sentence=I had not scheduled before I arrived.On the first day,I had my breakfast and worked in the hotel. After three days I had finished my job and left.    had got here=arrived

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  • Cathy (红)
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    the first sentence=I had not scheduled before I arrived.On the first day,I had my breakfast and worked in the hotel. After three days I had finished my job and left.    had got here=arrived

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