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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 5

What are people doing?

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from this lesson, describe the activities that six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and I. EX. The postman often pushes a cart in the morning.

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I live in Shenzhen now. It's a beautiful and big city.There are many buildings.It is adjacent to Hong Kong.
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  • Awen
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    It is just north of Hongkong. Shenzhen is China's centre of electronics. There are 15,000 electronics companies in Shenzhen. majority of people in Shenzhen work in export related industries.
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    Thank you.You are an old China hand.
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    Very good and nice, keep going. Regards, Shirin.
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