English Writing Exercise

How many objects?

Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

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Manuel Baj...
The man has two cars: a yellow one and a blue one. The woman has three teaspoon in her hand. The grandmother has a ten candies in her table.
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Submitted: 2009-06-26 00:51:42




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  • 2009-05-19 01:33:24
    Schatten
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    "The woman has three teaspoons in her hand.  The grandmother has a ten candies on her table."

    Good work, my friend!

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  • 2009-05-20 16:08:33
    Sunny
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    Good Effort !  Good, but  more content would make it even better. Continue the good work. 

      Another way of saying "a yellow one and a blue one" =  One yellow and one blue.

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  • 2009-05-21 04:46:01
    edulm1038
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    Good.  I agree with Schatten.

    Ed

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  • 2009-06-26 00:51:42
    Amanda Jamma

    Muy buen ejemplo de la puntuacion en la primera frase! Solo estos cambios: three teaspoons; grandmother has ten candies on her table

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