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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5

How many objects?

Instructions: Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

Manuel Bajaña's submission: Average Rating:
The man has two cars: a yellow one and a blue one. The woman has three teaspoon in her hand. The grandmother has a ten candies in her table.
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  • Schatten
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    "The woman has three teaspoons in her hand.  The grandmother has a ten candies on her table."

    Good work, my friend!

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  • Sunny
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    Good Effort !  Good, but  more content would make it even better. Continue the good work. 

      Another way of saying "a yellow one and a blue one" =  One yellow and one blue.

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  • edulm1038
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    Good.  I agree with Schatten.

    Ed

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  • Amanda Jamma
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    Muy buen ejemplo de la puntuacion en la primera frase! Solo estos cambios: three teaspoons; grandmother has ten candies on her table

    Submitted over a year ago

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