Going on Vacation
Instructions:
Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1
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August first, i am taking a vacation.First i am going to visit Egypt country. Because i love the Egyptian people and the Egyptian civlization. I am visiting the monuments. I am taking my lunch in the restaurant near the Nil river. I am doing the shopping in the center of purchase in the cairo. I am buying some jewels. In the end i am eating a delicious dinner in the balconny of my room in the hotel and watching the woman how is dancing oriental in the hall.
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On the first of August, I will be taking a vacation. First I am going to visit Egypt country. because I love the Egyptian people and the Egyptian civilization. I will be visiting the monuments and will be having lunch in the restaurant near the Nile river. I will be shopping in the center of purchase in the Cairo. I will buying some jewerly. At the end, I will eat a delicious dinner on the balconny of my room in the hotel while watching the woman how is dance in the oriental hall.
*Remember to use the future tense.
*I hope you will enjoy yourself.
* Don't make your man cry when he sees his credit card bill after you buy all that jewerly. :-)
On the first of August, I am taking a going on vacation. First, I will am going to visit Egypt, country because I love the Egyptian people and the Egyptian civlization. I am will visit the monuments. I will have am taking my lunch in the at a restaurant near the Nile River. Then, I am doing the will go shopping in the center of purchase in the Cairo, and I am to buy some jewelry. In the evening, end am I will have eating a delicious dinner on my hotel room balcony of my room in the hotel and watch the women how is do their dancing oriental dance in the hall.
Excellent! You did well, Keep it up.
August first, I am taking a vacation. First I am going to visit Egypt country, because I love the Egyptian people and the Egyptian civilization. I am visiting the monuments. I am taking my lunch in the restaurant near the Nile River. I am doing the shopping in the center of purchase in the Cairo. I am buying some jewels. In the end I am eating a delicious dinner on the balcony of my room in the hotel and watching how the woman is dancing oriental in the hall.
Very good! Please ignore earlier review!
August first, I am taking a vacation. First I am going to visit Egypt country, because I love the Egyptian people and the Egyptian civilization. I am visiting the monuments. I am taking my lunch in the restaurant near the Nile River. I am doing the shopping in the center of purchase (commerce) in the Cairo. I am buying some jewels. In the end I am eating a delicious dinner on the balcony of my room in the hotel and watching how the woman is dancing oriental in the hall.
En anglais de l'Amérique du Nord, on écrit simplement:
On August 1, I am ... (mais on le prononce "first")
"On the first of August " is ok but more formal.
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Nile river
At the end I'll be eating...
watching the woman perform the oriental dance
On the first of August, I am taking a going on vacation. First, I will am going to visit Egypt, country because I love the Egyptian people and the Egyptian civlization. I am will visit the monuments. I will have am taking my lunch in the at a restaurant near the Nile River. Then, I am doing the will go shopping in the center of purchase in the Cairo, and I am to buy some jewelry. In the evening, end am I will have eating a delicious dinner on my hotel room balcony of my room in the hotel and watch the women how is do their dancing oriental dance in the hall.
I wish I could take the same vacations!