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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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On my desk is my computer, and a pen. The drawers have my notebook, a calculator and a rubber.
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  • anita
    Mochapoints: 410  |  Teacher Score: 125 (0%)
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    Mochapoints: 410  |  Teacher Score: 125 (0%)
    It's better to change There are a computer and a pen on my desk. There are my notebook, a calculator and a rubber in my drawer.
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  • ate sho
    Mochapoints: 304  |  Teacher Score: 205 (0%)
    You can also try this one..... On my desk I have my computer and pen, while in my drawer I have my notebook, calculator and rubber.
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  • katya
    Mochapoints: 617  |  Teacher Score: 62 (0%)
    There is my computer on my table. There are a notebook, a calculator and a rubber in my drawer.
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