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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 4

When and where?

Instructions: Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.

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The woman is going to the cinema at seven o'clock but the man is still there. The girl and the boy have received a letter today at 6 o'clock in the evening from thier friends in america. They are very glad with it. I go to the restaurant at 8 o'clock on the beach. It is small but the visitors find it very nice and you have anice day.
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  • Jo
    Mochapoints: 9467  |  Teacher Score: 4640 (100%)

    their friends

    America

     

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  • crmla2
    Mochapoints: 13329  |  Teacher Score: 4776 (100%)

    The woman is going to the cinema at seven o'clock but the man is still there. The girl and the boy have received a letter today at 6 o'clock in the evening from their friends in America. They are very glad with it. I go to the restaurant at 8 o'clock on the beach. It is small but the visitors find it very nice. I wish   you  a nice day.

    Hello Sabri, it is an excellent submission. Keep up practice.

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  • natijami
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    a good job

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