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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 1

Describe your clothes

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?

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I live in Guangzhou, China. I really love my city. It's very beautiful. However, the transportation is not good, for there are more and more people have their own cars. So sometimes it would cause traffic jam. But, metro is very convenient! You know, Asia Game will be held in our city, our government is making effort to improve our city better and better. As cantonese we look forward to your arrival. If you go on vocation, it's worth visiting Ersha Island, a new scenic spot in Guangzhou. And do not forget try some cantonese food. Enjoy our city...
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  • Gualberto Olive...
    Mochapoints: 5171  |  Teacher Score: 2385 (0%)

    Good work! But look: use the verb ''to do'' instead of ''to make'' in: our goverment is doing (not making). And: when you have two verbs together, you have to put the second one in the infinitive form in: "do not forget try some... (the correct is: do not forget to try some...)

    Keep on studying! Hugs!

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • gui_
    Mochapoints: 11737  |  Teacher Score: 5282 (95%)

    Good. Keep Practicing.

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