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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 3

When are the activities?

Instructions: Provide the time for the activities of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The girls are reading a book at nine o’clock. The boys play in the bedroom at seven thirty.

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The man sees television at twenty o'clock. The boy make a schower at twenty-fifteen . The girl brings the dinner at twenty thirty. I'd go to bed at eleven o'clock. Please make your correcting before twelf 0'clock.
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  • Julia
    Mochapoints: 984  |  Teacher Score: 627 (100%)

    The man sees television at twenty o'clock. The boy make a schower at twenty-fifteen . The girl brings the dinner at twenty thirty. I'd go to bed at eleven o'clock.

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  • Julia
    Mochapoints: 984  |  Teacher Score: 627 (100%)

    watches TV

    takes a shower

    has dinner

    go to bed

    at 8.15 p.m.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • crmla2
    Mochapoints: 13329  |  Teacher Score: 4776 (100%)

    The man is going to watche TV at 8 o'clock. The boy makesshower at  ten-fifteen . The girl  has a dinner at eight thirty. I go to bed at eleven o'clock. Please make your corrections before twelve p.m.

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  • natijami
    Mochapoints: 14229  |  Teacher Score: 11181

    to watch Tv

    to have a shower

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  • Jo
    Mochapoints: 9467  |  Teacher Score: 4640 (100%)

    The man watches television at 8.00  o'clock. The boy takes (or has) a schower at 8.15 . The girl brings the dinner at 8.30. I'd go to bed at eleven o'clock. Please make your corrections before twelve o'clock.

    keep it up

    Submitted over a year ago

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