How many objects?
Instructions:
Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5
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The girl has a flower and eighteen candles, she has a birthday.Her friends bring eighteen gifts and the parents have for many drinks concerned.
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The girl has a flower and eighteen candles, she has a birthday. Better to say : it's her birthday.
Her friends bring her eighteen gifts and the (her) parents have made arrangements for many drinks.
Hello Sabri, Look Jo's corrections.
Keep up practice.